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  1. Eonrider

    In Progress The Adventures of Chris

    Okay, I know it took a while (I have lazy syndrome) but Chapter Three is here! Chapter Three; The Beginner Battle “So, uh, hi?” Chris and Fallamanda were sitting in Chris’s room, nervously looking each other in the eye. “Hi to you, too,” replied Fallamanda. “I was wondering what my trainer...
  2. Eonrider

    In Progress The Adventures of Chris

    _Ditto_, do you mean by 'takes care of both points' that my trainerfic no longer bears resemblance to TQftL, and Fallamanda isn't too similar to Charmander? Please say yes. Although, I have a feeling I messed something up in that chapter. Might be just me though. It could also be the fact...
  3. Eonrider

    In Progress The Adventures of Chris

    No, Fallamanda always stands on four legs.
  4. Eonrider

    In Progress The Adventures of Chris

    Okay, here's Chapter Two! Chapter Two; A Pokemon Decision Chris opened his eyes. For a while he lay in bed, but then he remembered. He sat bolt upright, and threw the sheets off his bed. He ran downstairs and checked the time. Seven o’clock. He didn’t have to be at the lab until nine, so...
  5. Eonrider

    In Progress The Adventures of Chris

    Thanks, Leafpool, that did help a lot, just a question, did you read my explanation as to why there are only three students graduating. In case you didn't, here it is : If you did, read it again, in case you missed something. If it still doesn't work, let me know and I'll rewrite it.
  6. Eonrider

    In Progress The Adventures of Chris

    _Ditto_ and Leafpool, thank you for your critisism. I have edited the story so it properly explains the matter you both brought up. It is in the part where Chris is just leaving the school.
  7. Eonrider

    In Progress The Adventures of Chris

    Okay, glad that you're not mad, sorry that you're the one feeling horrible. I'll keep an eye out for your fic. The next chapter comes up when I get round to it.
  8. Eonrider

    In Progress The Adventures of Chris

    Okay I've already revised and rewritten the first chapter of Chris's Pokemon adventure (WOW, that was fast!). It is hopefully non-plagairist, and a lot better than before. Here it is: Chapter One; Start of One Journey, End of Another “The three students to graduate are...” The entire room...
  9. Eonrider

    In Progress The Adventures of Chris

    Okay, I'm glad that you don't hate me. I meant no harm, but I'm going to try to rewrite the first chapter of the story so it's different. And yes, I'm going to keep the Pokemon Speech idea, but all credit for it goes to Butterfree. I'll have the rewritten Chapter 1 up when I can be bothered.
  10. Eonrider

    In Progress The Adventures of Chris

    Oh, sorry... I wasn't trying to rip off The Quest For The Legends... That was just my major inspiration. Can I keep the Pokemon Speech, though? I'll try not to make it similar to Butterfree's works. Please don't be mad at me... although... the next Pokemon Chris captures is an Eevee, and I...
  11. Eonrider

    In Progress The Adventures of Chris

    Seeing as this my first post outside the introduction thread, I would just like to say, HI, EVERYONE! Now that's out of the way, Let me introduce my first attempt at a fanfic. It does not have a proper name yet, and the plot is almost nonexistant. I will make one up eventually. It features a...
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